TheGirlFromMars

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Welcome and thanks :)

nope!!! u jst wrote 2 chpts rite so its kinda hard 2 tell bt those 2 are nyc!!!! :)

Really no criticism?.......at all???

Its nyc.....:)

And tell me about mine no modesty 

Yeah!! I guess.....

It did not suck it had a good plot it would have sucked if if was a weird romance story without a plot. 

No prob!!! :)

Well u knw u cam temme the truth...... I wnt feel if u temme ot actually scukd'!!!!!! :)