TheHarshBitch

Heyy!! Can I ask you for a critique on the first chapter of my story 'Jemma'? I really like your 'about me' and I can use someone honest and 'harsh'. Thanks :)

Thank you for your critique on Transcend. Appreciate it. =)

Hey the critiquing club is slow and I can't open your thread. Anyway, will you critique my story Holly's Dare? 
          I want the harsh cut throat make me cry into my pillow critique!
          Thanks!
          Meg