TheHasthaNakshtra

You know what I am kinda sleepy, will update two chapters tomorrow. *sapne dekhna achi baat hoti hei, sapno mei jeena nahi.*

Adaerra

DARLING DARLING DIL KYU TODA 
          Hi where are u girl hame u aisa chodo na 
          Are u okay no matter what dont ghost us dar lag jata hai

Adaerra

ok ok yaar take care and no worries eagerly waiting age kya hoga
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TheHasthaNakshtra

@Adaerra Aisey nahi hei yawrr I'll update tomorrow pakka promise fever aya tha(´༎ຶ ͜ʖ ༎ຶ `)♡
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Adaerra

also ok i need ideas or u know suggestions and as ur fic has already made me fall in love with idea of OC sorry in advance but this is gonna be long. u can give ur own idea or 2 about what we can do after ur own fic has hamza not carrying the burden alone and i really want to cover that gremlin does a good job in romance hamlina but spy yalina is diff. as of now she is busy in her tests and i cant think of how to approach their meeting becuz our yalina is mature and experienced and tasked by RAW to spy on an unreliable asset. i dont want it to be hot older guy trapping even if she goes along with it becus it doesnt fit our yalina even as a cover . so what sketch we have is that this hamza who just like urs never had a relation is struck with lightening bolt with this wily yalina even if he is still mission oriented and yes this yalina knows he is deathrow prisoner who RAW thinks needs to be watched for long term cover . let me know ur thoughts on this.  Wait here in this OC yalina is second generation spy if u are interest check my chats with ib gremlin https://www.tumblr.com/ib-gremlin/817238906592477184/hi-this-is-not-a-question-just-me-typing-to-get?source=share. and this too https://www.tumblr.com/ib-gremlin/817968275903463424/hiii-can-you-write-something-maybe-a-drabble-or?source=share . it would be great if u check these out but its too detailed and scattered but u might get summary from what i wrote in this box so yeah want to know ur thoughts about it.

Adaerra

@Adaerra no just want ur views on this
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TheHasthaNakshtra

@Adaerra I am quite confused ngl, where do you want my help
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TheHasthaNakshtra

TheHasthaNakshtra

@Sragdhara OKIE JAAN NO WORRIES 。⁠◕⁠‿⁠◕⁠。
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Sragdhara

@Tharali_Tharali Besides, i am burnout on reading dhurandhar fics, i feel like reading something else for a while...toh kuch din ke liye aapke book na padhu toh gussa mat ho jana babu!!(づ ̄3 ̄)づ╭❤️~LOVE YOU BBG❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Sragdhara

@Tharali_Tharali Ywar!!!tum toh update pe update kare jaa rhe ho aur yaha mujhe time hi nhi mil raha padhne ke liye (T_T)
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aao-kabhi-haveli-pe

Yenduku rudega matladthunav @Tharali_Tharali na thoni? 
          Konjum gentlega matladochu kada? 
          [DJ TILLU REFERENCE IYKYK]

aao-kabhi-haveli-pe

@Tharali_Tharali i used speak better trust me T-T but ever since i have been travelling for studies, and use only english, i am grateful i can still read my mother tongue T-T
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aao-kabhi-haveli-pe

@Tharali_Tharali newbie bangaram, like i am from border and i love telegu cinema so! like i can talk 20-30%
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itrwali

Lowkey problematic opinion but:
          
          I think if they had let ranveer carry the jaskirat look throughout the movie, and not made sara arjun's character so unnecessarily childish, dumb and coy-
          
          -i wouldn't actually have had that much of a problem with their onscreen dynamic even if they had a 20 year age gap irl

itrwali

@Tharali_Tharali i mean yeah generally i agree but in an extremely specific context it could've been better in the sense if he didn't tell her stuff because he works in a very particular field and her knowing info could make her a target and hence put her own life at risk 
            
            But they didn't bother to show that much context, they were like keh dia pati ne, maan le
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TheHasthaNakshtra

@itrwali Faxs, they could have not written hamza saying if you want to walk with me, you shouldn't ask questions. That's red flag behavior. 
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itrwali

@Tharali_Tharali i think coming to his home could still be contextualized.
            
            They could show that she trusts him enough to go to his house at once cause pyar mohabbat and all 
            
            But also personality wise they could make her sharp, intelligent so that she actually confronts him what was all of it about, why exactly he asked her to do so and so
            
            The problem wasn't with her merely not pursuing medical. It was with the fact that my girl had no personality/purpose/interest/life of her own.
            
            She had no inner world.
            
            We all wake up and look at the sun. She prolly wakes up to look at hamza.
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itrwali

I'm in my party dress
          He says im such a mess

author_aaru08

@itrwali ohhh because saare feed Mei aise messages hai isliye I thought that I missed something or what
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TheHasthaNakshtra

@author_aaru08 Hame bhi nahi pata(´༎ຶ ͜ʖ ༎ຶ `)♡
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author_aaru08

@Tharali_Tharali ek Chita doubt yeha kya chal raha hai am confused
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