TheHiddenHeart

To my 31 followers who were so kind as to support me...
          
          Up until yesterday, the fact that I had put the first ten chapters of my book online had completely slipped my mind! I haven't been on this account in years. Thank you for your comments and votes. I have now taken A Child's Cry down because I've finished it and I'm finally getting it ready to be published! The draft you read has been revised and rewritten a 1000 times since, but thank you for the feedback and support I got while it was on here; it definitely encouraged me to keep going.
          
          God bless you all. 
          TheHiddenHeart

I've uploaded 2 new chapters - please check them out and tell me what you think of them :) The 9th chapter is particularly emotional... I'm not sure if I nailed it or not so let me know! 

if you can check this out please http://www.wattpad.com/2645787-chained-destiny#

I have just uploaded the eighth chapter of 'A Child's Cry.' I will be uploading the chapters on a weekly basis from now on.
          
          Thank you, thank you, thank you to those who have been giving me feedback! It's so, so helpful. I've already done some further editing to the prologue and I like what I was able to change... I've also been wondering about interspersing some more 'childhood' memories in between the 'painful' chapters... any thoughts on that idea? 
          
          I've always been my own worst critic; I have yet to meet someone who is harder on myself than I am, lol. If you fit the bill, come on over... I want this book to be the best that it can be. 
          
          Thanks again!
          TheHiddenHeart

@young7 Sadly, yes. And thank you, I'm glad to hear you like it. Any criticism you can offer? Any way can it improve?

I love your story and is it really true? 

@ForeverHope Thank you very much!

Welcome to Wattpad(:

Sorry for spamming your inboxes! Just want to get a few chapts. online before seeking out more critics. Thanks to those who fanned, voted, and commented. It's greatly appreciated. It's feedback I'm looking for though, so if you can, help me to get this story out there. 
          Thanks!
          TheHiddenHeart