HarshReviewer

Hi can you please review my story called Problem? (: would like to know what you think about it 

Could you review my newest story please? It is called Best Friends Forever?

http://www.wattpad.com/story/4213353-move-along-wattyawards2013
          It was time. I felt it in my bones. The feeling that I didn't belong here anymore. The same way I felt years ago when I left the majestic city to travel around the world, going wherever the wind blew. Going to the airport, waiting for  an interesting name to pop up on the 'On Time Flights' screen, buying a ticket, and flying to my next 'home'. Then picking up my bags, going to the airport, and repeating the process for roughly nine years. Never going to the same place twice. But home? That was the last place I wanted to go...
          
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/3237055-brick-by-boring-brick
          Savannah Johnson felt like she was cursed. When she thought she would be right, she was wrong. And when she was right, it was never a good thing. Then new student Isaac Fields comes along, determined to befriend her, make Savannah realize that her bad luck has changed, whether she liked it or not, and help her rebuild her life, brick by boring brick.

Hi there, I was wondering if you could review mine?:)
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/4270987-the-saviour
          
          Would mean a ton to me.

Persistent Silence 
          
          	
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/3776889-persistent-silence
          
          
          Paranormal/horror
          
          
          Behind every myth there's an ounce of truth.  In any legend there’s a hint of fact. From the depths of history comes understanding. Truth, fact, and understanding lead to knowledge. 
          And knowledge can be dangerous. 
          Four teens search to discover the mysteries in their town, and learn that some secrets should not be unburied. Strange things have happened here; a mysterious fire burned the Cornerstone Children’s Orphanage to the ground, an abandoned town still holds many secrets, and a mysterious man tries to hinder their investigations.
           The past is eerie, the present is dangerous, and the future is deadly. 
          

Thanks for voting for forever friends. I would really appreciate a comment if it is not too much trouble. I really appreciate the vote though.

http://www.wattpad.com/12123732-over-again-niall-horan-fan-fic

If you get a chance, please review my short story. Any help would be appreciated.
          Thanks!
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/935810-forever-friends
          
          

Hey could you read my story? It is called Heart for a Heart. I know you might be harsh but i would really like for some feedback please.
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/1290727-heart-for-a-heart 

Hey! It would be pretty awesome if you could review my story, "In My Dreams". 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/3635871-in-my-dreams
          
          Thank you! 
          
          AmigaChica:)