Español:
¿Les gustaría una forma de narrar más... Especial? No se cómo decirlo. Así que acá van unos ejemplos que me invente:
"Yaroslav empieza a sentir cierta calidez familiar. Cómo si lo estuvieran sacando de una cueva mientras la luz del sol le decía "¡Hola, viejo amigo!""
"En ese momento. La visión de Jack se hacia oscura, como si la luz estuviera negándose a apoyar a Jack en ver por volverse tan pecador"
"Jack y Claire estaban abrazando con tanta fuerza y amor, que parecía que estaban intentado ser un solo ser, para estar juntos por siempre"
"Jack mira desconcertado en dónde Abbie miraba. No había nada, pero Abbie seguía mirando como si hubiera algo que nadie más podía ver. O mejor dicho, algo que nadie TENIA que ver, pero que de alguna manera el lo estaba viendo"
English:
Would you like a more... Special way of narrating? I don't know how to say it. So here are some examples I made up:
"Yaroslav begins to feel a certain familiar warmth. As if he were being pulled out of a cave while the sunlight said, "Hello, old friend!""
"At that moment. Jack's vision went dark, as if the light were refusing to support Jack in seeing, having become such a sinner."
"Jack and Claire were hugging each other with such strength and love, it seemed they were trying to become one, to be together forever."
"Jack stares in bewilderment at where Abbie was looking. There was nothing, but Abbie kept looking as if there was something no one else could see. Or rather, something no one HAD to see, but somehow he was seeing it."
