TheImmortalRiot

Hey guys, sorry for not updating in..awhile. But I'm currently out of ideas on how to continue my fanfic, and I would like some suggestions if you have any, and I'll see what I can do. It would help a lot, and make more progress on the fanfic, and if you wouldn't mind not suggesting lemon too soon, that'll be nice...cause, I'd like to build a story before getting on with it, I'm sorry, I'm really craving the lemon also but..a story makes the fic a bit better. Thank you!

TwistedTwixx

@TheImmortalRiot ive noticed inconsistencies between chapters. They dont connect together its more like each chapter is a different scenerio with a different time frame instead of it flowing together as one story as a whole. You left off with Morty being sick. You can make it more dramatic. He gets better, they go on an adventure and in that adventhre they almost get captured and arrested they escape go into hiding hut morty is fatally shot by something and Rick needs to go out and capture a magic ploomp to heal his wound because mortal stiches wont do.
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screamingSometimes

Heyyy!! I came here looking for the fic that got taken down (sadness), because I was being trash and looking through google and a screenshot of your story was in the images, and when I couldn't find it I searched your account.
          
          May I, too, be trash with you? ]:3

TheImmortalRiot

Yes! You can indeed. Join my disgusting cult.
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DuskyTheWeirdo

I think ricks actually 60 idk xD

DuskyTheWeirdo

@DuskyTheWeirdo xD
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TheImmortalRiot

So that's the age I'm gonna go with.
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TheImmortalRiot

Watch the episode with Tiny Rick, the principals says something about Rick being an 80 year old man in a teens body.
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