markkeifer

Why my book is not opening vows of rivals can you help me plz I want to read this book plz 

soya_nova

May I ask where is vows of rivals ??? 

maxinexander

Ohhh i like the new coverr

maxinexander

Heyyy author, i kinda just wanted to give a little constructive criticism and/or advice as your book is actually quite good but i feel as though you should change the cover as it looks as if it is AI and i have noticed that people will read the book based on the cover and that way im hoping you get more readers and i personally never would have picked this book because of the cover buttt i was bored and im sooo glad i did cause your writing style is really good and the characters are very lovable but basically my point is that you could get or make a much more attractive cover from pinterest or any app of your choiceALSO you should make character aesthetics before the first chapter of your book ( cause it helps in getting a feel for the characters

TheInkBorne

@maxinexander I'll look for better cover thenThanks for the suggestion ❤️
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angelharrison87

Question did you write this book before for some reason I feel like I read it before.

TheInkBorne

@angelharrison87 Yes and no  I actually wrote this story in my native language first. This is just the translated version. There’s no way you’ve read the original 
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