I want to say thank you to everyone who has participated in #NBR, especially this week. I have been spotlighted and illuminated with all the comments. Thank you. I have decided to rewrite the Jarhead Wars because I have not focused enough on Alexander the protagonist. I'm going to concentrate on the use of limited perspectives per chapter because omniscient writing doesn't truly establish a connection with the reader. I hope that you enjoy the re-edited version. I think it's so much better.
Again, thank you all!