TheLGuy

For those interested, I made a song playlist for "SoA: Awakening." You can find the link to said playlist on my twitter/x, or you can just listen to each song/music individually via the chapters.
          	
          	Can't say for sure if I'll make a playlist for every single one of my stories, but I will make one for the entire SoA series.

Corrupt_Phoenix

So I recently watched this video (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N3bn57twbHM) that uses the limited info of the cephalopods to detail/theorize their biology, while also addressing any mistranslations that still exist within the games. I do recommend that you give it a watch for fun and to see if there is something that you may want to apply to your future stories regarding Splatoon, if you haven’t watched it already. In my opinion, I really liked the video, and while watching, it reinforced my idea of the cephalopods being glass cannons, and I’d really like to discuss that with you along with potentially developing the characters and overall biology if it's fine with you.
          For one, their thin skin. In the video, on the section ‘what’s canon?’ Nogami states something about ‘cephalopod’s skin being too thin for the water due to their evolution.’ The very same piece of their biology that allows them to transform from kid to squid and vice versa. For being able to transform to move flexibly and fluidly, they trade off the durability of their skin, and it is why I 100% believe that they are weak defensively speaking. Perhaps that also explains why they are able to be splatted so easily, their skin doesn’t really provide any sort of resistance to enemy ink without stuff like armor to help. Sal, though, is a special case in which he can’t get splatted by different colored ink, only by being crushed or cut open by rollers, splatanas, and brushes. While I understand what his gift does, I would like to know how it works. I’d like to suggest something, using the video as inspiration for this idea: Sal’s skin is way thicker than the average cephalopod to be able to avoid dying from enemy ink and perhaps even water for a brief period of time. However, his skin is still flexible enough to allow Sal to shift forms at will. Now I’m not sure if that’s what you have planned, or if you have another explanation for his condition, but I’d like to offer a suggestion. (1/3)

Corrupt_Phoenix

@TheLGuy Honestly it's no problem! At this rate I might as well be a co-writer or something for these stories lol. But all jokes aside I can't wait to see what your explanation might be for their gifts. Granted I'll probably have to wait a very long time for them but I don't really mind.
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TheLGuy

@Corrupt_Phoenix So I just recently watched the video, and I gotta say, me and Rassicas must share a brain cell, 'cause some of their points are quite similar to the ideas I had in regards to inkfish and their biology. For one, I figured their ink had something to do with osmotic pressure, though not quite to the same extent as Rassicas discussed.
            
            I will say though, everything in the video will definitely help me air out some ideas I had for the sequel stories of "The Octo Bros."
            
            Speaking of the bros, I like the idea you had with Sal and having a slightly thicker  skin compared to most inkfish. While I already had my own explanation for it (that involving it had something to do with... well, I won't spoil, but you'll see in the first story soon enough), I can reinforce the idea by adding that tidbit as well.
            
            I also had a different explanation to Cal's immense strength, however, compressed-ink will also tie in incredibly well to the lore I have on him.
            
            Considering the progress I'm making on the first story, sufficed to say I won't have the time to delve deeper into their gifts. The first story was simply meant to lay the ground work for the series anyways. Not to worry though! The second story will be family themed anyway, which will be perfect to dive deeper into how exactly Sal and Cal's gifts work. Furthermore, it'll be much more exciting than Zero to Hero, that I am willing to guarantee.
            
            Thanks for bringing all of that to my attention and giving me those interesting ideas. They will be incorporated into my AU soon enough! At this rate, I might just have to shout you out for all your ideas, lmao
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Corrupt_Phoenix

There are other parts of the video that I really like to highlight too. For example, the ‘death means nothing’ part. The basic highlight is that to the cephalopods, death/being splatted doesn’t matter too much to them because of the respawn points. But because you (as the creator of this timeline) literally created a crisis where that luxury is gone, it literally changed so many inklings to care about the very concept of life. I’m not sure how much you plan to drastically change how the cephalopods view life after this, but perhaps I recommend that many of them even after the energy crisis is resolved, to fear battling as much. Perhaps to indicate how much damage was done to those who lost loved ones due to the lack of a respawn pad. Or perhaps everyone becomes ever more grateful for the existence of them. 
            Next thing is the osmotic pressure topic regarding emotion and specials. Apparently, specials mainly charge up though the inkling's emotions throughout battle. Excitement, anger, sadness, etc. Any emotion channels through them, building their special, but it does overheat them too much when they keep building up. Sometimes though, it can overload to the point where their immediate instinct is to jump into water to cool themselves when they can't use their special in a safe environment. A few things from this.
            One, you can probably implement this into the story by having inklings trying everything to ensure that they don't overload and by proxy, die.
            Two, I just found that fact incredibly funny. I really love when some game creators add this kind of stuff to the lore of a species. It's weird as hell but it can give people a good laugh at how reckless a fictional species can be.
            Three, and I'd really like to see this, but at some point, you gotta add something like this to the story. Like the characters get so incredibly mad they whip out something like a trizooka/inkzooka and air the place out. 
            Regardless, I’d like to know what you think.(3/3)
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TheLGuy

For those interested, I made a song playlist for "SoA: Awakening." You can find the link to said playlist on my twitter/x, or you can just listen to each song/music individually via the chapters.
          
          Can't say for sure if I'll make a playlist for every single one of my stories, but I will make one for the entire SoA series.

EwanKidner

Hey, remember me, I’m the guy that gave you a few funny scenarios where I was in the story, I was wondering if you would like to hear more.
          
          I have a couple here, I was wondering how both Akikta and the Splatoon, would react to them.
          
          1. I am with all of them, but there is a bit of trouble, I help Akikta and the Splatoon get out, they watch a few things happen, such as me falling in a hole, a large structure falling in the same hole, then it exploding, they all think that I probably died,
          
          Later I return, Akikta says ‘We thought you died’, and I Reply by dismissively waving my hand and say ‘Eh, a little death never killed anyone’
          
          (How do you think all of them, Akikta and the splatoon would react, do you think they would be like ‘what?’ Or something)
          
          2. We are all next to the manta Maria, I attach a device that I made to myself, someone asks what it does and I say that I made it a few minutes ago from stuff in Atlantis and that it gives a ‘slight’ strength enhancement, and that I just wanted to get some energy out of my system, I start slightly glowing, I then grab the entire manta Maria with one hand, lift it above my head, then throw it, and they all watch it fly up high and slowly land what looks like a hundred miles away, then I say, ‘Ah much better, less energy now’.
          
          How do you think everyone would react to that, and what expressions do you think they would be pulling.

TheLGuy

@EwanKidner My bad, I've been on that grind so I haven't been checking my wattpad, this response is long overdue-
            
            1. I can see the Splatoon maybe wondering if humans have their own respawn point-type device, which is something Marina would freak out over and be actively pestering you about. Akikta would just be utterly confused. Honestly, I don't think Metta (New Agent 3) or Pearl would care so much (assuming they still dislike you). Agent 8 would be genuinely interested on how you survived, same with Frye. Shiver would act like she doesn't care- but is also curious. The rest of them would just glad you're alright.
            
            2. Akikta wouldn't believe your statement at first, assuming you actually made trash out of some of Atlantis's junk. He wouldn't believe you until you tossed the Manta Maria. After which, he as well as mostly everyone else would honestly just have their jaws dropped. I feel like Metta and Frye would be the only one to give a response. Metta saying something about her still being tougher than you, while Frye would be giddy for a fight and absolutely deluded into thinking she could hold her own against you with your strength enhancement device.
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TheLGuy

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          Serious-ish update/question for my followers
          
          I know I don't have any obligations to finish the stories I start, but I feel like I owe it to myself and to you guys to actually finish projects I work on since at the time of me uploading the first chapter, I've already put in a moderate amount of effort into them. In the past, I used to be content with the fact that the stories I make will eventually be finished, but after seeing some stories I've started taking more than a year to finish, I've strived to do better in a timely manner.
          
          I'll admit, in the beginning, a key factor for me continuing to write was the engagement I received (even though that's not why I started). It didn't help that, at the time, I had no writer friends to chat with (I have a few now, but not a lot). So when my engagement dipped, so too did my drive for my fanworks, thus, I switched and started working on my original projects (since it is my goal to eventually become a published author). However, now that I've gotten to write a little for myself with no engagement whatsoever, I've learned a thing or two about truly writing for myself.
          
          This all brings me to the system I have in place now. So long as I follow it, not only will I have sufficient time to work on my own stuff and plenty of free time, but I'll also be able to consistently give you guys updates to my stories. The downside to this system is that I'll only be able to do it for one story at a time, as trying to spread it to all would not only take up a lot of time, but would also just slow down story updates all across the board. I know some of you guys don't mind waiting, but I still don't feel it's right on a personal level. I don't wish to be one of those authors who drop a story or two, may or may not finish it, and then disappear.

TheLGuy

@Corrupt_Phoenix I agree. From the numerous splatoon human fics I read, most of them either make the MC overpowered, or make the MC's adversaries weak/incompetent. That in itself isn't inherently bad, so long as the story is interesting. Honestly, I'm glad those stories are the majority, otherwise I probably wouldn't have gotten the idea to make Akikta the opposite.
            
            I like Akikta being weak since it means he can't brute force his way through objectives like Sake. Plus, him being stronger than most of the people in the new world wouldn't make sense. He's a child, granted, a very smart one. I think he shows his intelligence more in the last story, but he's always been like that. But he never liked applying himself, so it's a shame the circumstances he found himself in basically forced him to "mature" more quickly. Even then, that didn't stop him from making stupid mistakes. It's human nature to do so, after all.
            
            As for Nakji and Inka, I gotta admit, aside from Sake, Nakji might be my fav OC I've made thus far. There's a lot I have planned with her in the future, but if we're just talking about SoA, I mainly made her as a way to show the audience that, even though Akikta lost everything, there's nothing stopping him from building a new. The thing is, he's mentally stuck in the past and still craves human interaction, which pushes him to do the things he does. It's also why he's dense towards Inka.
            
            Granted, I initially had no intentions of even making a love interest for Akikta, since I felt plenty of splatoon human fanfics already did that. Though, to me, I saw no other way for Inka to just willingly uproot her whole life for two people she just met. Love is blinding, so if she did it out of that, it'd make perfect sense. I'll admit tho, regarding Inka's love, I might've ended things off a bit more tragically than needed.
            
            Regardless, yea. I wanted to do something different from the norm, and while I don't think I nailed it, I hope it kept you and others entertained
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Corrupt_Phoenix

@TheLGuy Then, there is of course Nakji and Inka, the two that stand next to Akikta. I'm going to admit, even thogh Nakji has the clingy sister trope (or something similar), I feel like it does very well, espeially considered how they develop throughout the story. She had nothing, or seem to have anyting even while being a pirate, but one decision to travel with him, and she felt a genuine bond, as both wanted to protect each other and support each other like family. Of course she wouldn't want anything happening to her brother. Even though they don't even share blood or race, they were family, thousands of years apart, united.
            Then there is Inka, the love interest of Akikta. Another person that was lonely, didn't seem to have anything or anyone, especially since Astro spent most of his time in the metro. Akikta ended up being her light, and after Akikta showing his emotional side, she fell in love, despite him admiting his lies. She helps him despite the very obvious risks. She likely categorizes into the type of person to fall in love very easily, but again, it feels so nicely set up that it isn't obvious or worsens her character. She's rational, even knowing when she is to emotional herself as seen with her confession to Akikta. Or at least, thats how I see it, probably glossing over other details. Like Nakji, she cares for her friends/crush, she has what I think is unique character, something I don't see in other fanfics.
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Corrupt_Phoenix

@TheLGuy You're welcome man. But yeah, part if not most of what gets me so hooked on the major Splatoon fanfic storyline, or specifically SOA was that the main character, Akikta, had actual flaws that don't seem to be present or weren't presented well in other human splatoon fics, and that their choices and mistakes actually impacted everyone's lives and continue to still affect others.
            For example, Akikta's first mistake: unleashing Aku. In a desperate attempt for human interaction, he woke up an artificial creature that eventually killed so many inklings, octolings, etc, meaning that he has inadvertently killed so many due to his mistake. Then there is trusting Sake/believing he is human, in which his consequence was that he had the whole Squidbeak after him, not to also mention that he was clearly weaker than most of them, really only being able to beat Neo 3/Metta and occasionally 8 when she didn't plan on fighting her. There was also the other consequence of finding out the truth after blindly following him. Of course, I can talk on and on such as him poisioning himself due to hunger, protecting Marina, fusing himself with Aku, etc. Point is, his flaws and actions led to actual consequenses that didn't just go away, it just led to more and more problems, changed others. 
            While this rant isn't probably my best analysis, the main point I'm trying to say is that the storyline doesn't feel as cliche, or follow similar tropes that I feel are way too present in other fics. Akikta isn't overpowered, even with his and Aku's fusion. He's lucky, but it doesn't feel like he's lucky to the point to where he wins through plot armor. It feels like his luck is borrowed, and that he actually pays the price for it later, potentially ending in a cycle of being blessed then being cursed and so on. He feels genuinely human, he makes mistakes, he wants to amend those mistakes, he connects to others despite being a different race, and he actually acts like many others would.
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look_under_there69

I’m ready for their reactions to be revealed that a human named Akikta was alive and the idols met him but basically “betrayed” him

Corrupt_Phoenix

@look_under_there69 I am as well, but it is not likely to be the case, at least in Zero to Hero. Unless the subject of Akikta is important later in the book, we likely won't hear anything important/new of him. However, I am also curious for the reactions of each one of them, especially Sepia's (if she is included in that discussion) if Aku is also mentioned, since Aku did kill those close to Sepia. 
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Corrupt_Phoenix

Hey bro, almost forgot and before the Grand Fest starts:
          -Did you enjoy the Big Run?
          -What team did you pick for the Grand fest?

TheLGuy

@Corrupt_Phoenix The salmonids used to do us dirty, now we're the ones doing them dirty 
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Corrupt_Phoenix

@TheLGuy oh and also, I just realized, the recent big run could also be part of the reason in your story (if the salmonid population decrease is mentioned more in detail) why there is such a decline. We got like 1.5 million eggs, 3 eggs for every boss, also not accounting for any missed uncollected eggs, players for sure decimated the salmonid population.
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Corrupt_Phoenix

@TheLGuy well I'm team present, but if you do pick future, I wish you the best of luck, and I hope you give it your all
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