TheLambdaRebel107

Just posted the official first chapter to my newly updated story! Sorry if it's a little short, but I assure you that the next one will be longer and will try to have acton included.
          	
          	Let me know what you think of it!
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/345458907

FoxBoy2099

I like your idea, but I need more than one antagonists other than the DHORKS.

TheLambdaRebel107

@FoxBoy2099 maybe have Striker make a comeback and he can be a new type of nemesis for Y/N and Loona's children. 
            
            And maybe expand upon Stella manipulating Octavia only for the latter to realize that her mother doesn't care for her.
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TheLambdaRebel107

Anyone here a fan of the Half-Life games? ;)

OmegaAlphaBeta

@TheLambdaRebel107 I like half life tho I forgot a lot of it and it's ashame that the gman is remembered more as a skibidi toilet than in the games
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