Hi, thank you for your feedback on my book, I appreciate it. About updating; I am currently in exam season and completing my GCSE's which in the UK is our final exams before leaving school, this is why I haven't updated as I have been neck high in studying for these exams. About June time I hope to post the next few chapters as I am currently writing them every spare chance I get. With regards to the book what I really wanted to portray was how much of a strong minded girl Hope is as she was able to fight this coma, when she sat straight up what I was really trying to go for was the effect of how in shock she was to finally be awake and to see her family with her own eyes again. Thank you for commenting your feedback, it is really appreciated as it helps me to develop my writing and let's me know what you readers want to see, also don't put yourself down like that as everyone has there own writing style that puts them different from the others.
Thank you once again, TheLittleBrunette.x