bhartishreya
Something about ch 40 didn't sit right with me (..)
Uhhh am not saying you didn't put effort , what am trying to say is the way they were talking I dnt know I didn't feel what I felt from past 39 chapters . Uhhhh how do I say it mmmm...... itfeltsoAIcoded ......It didn't sound human . Sorry if it offended you im really sorry but that was just my opinion. Sorry again .
TheManuchrome
@1shreya2 Nahh. Even I'm disappointed with that chapter. The dialogues are written by me but they are lacking the depth of emotions I usually try to include. Hence they might feel like AI coded. I think I need to take a break. My readers deserve better chapters. I'll be back when the situation gets better and I feel better.
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