Hi Tay, I'm so exhilarated that you decided to vote on the prologue a first couple chapters of my book Trinity. My wish is that you'll enjoy my little fictional worlds as much as I do creating them! Please don't be shy either; PM or comment your thoughts – good or bad.
Also, I noticed you follow @Sarsar14 and @Jesusfreak202. If you haven't read their books yet (doubtful since you follow them) I'd greatly encourage you to. Both are amazing authors, and great people to get to know. :)
Have a wonderful weekend,
~Cybor