TheMoonGaizer

I forgot to mention this but tweaked chapter 21 a bit as well, just a tiny bit though

TheMoonGaizer

Update: Hopefully made Chapter 8 better for all of you.
          2nd part "Sick to Excess" is not the best but at least better than before.
          
          "Cutie Pox" is way better in my opinion now.
          
          Worked all night to make it a tint bit better

blueworrier

@TheMoonGaizer Chapter 8 rewrite was pretty great, makes me even more excited for Chapter 22
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TheMoonGaizer

I just wanna say I love how much my writing has gotten better over the months.

blueworrier

Those were some nice edits. Can't wait to see what you'll do with Chapter 23
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blueworrier

Please don't tell me you got locked out of your account again 

TheMoonGaizer

@blueworrier I'm on vacation right now and I have no certain date when it's coming out but I guess you can say when I get back it's coming super soon.
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blueworrier

Well, I really hate to rush, but when will the new Alicorn colt be published?
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