Hi! I saw your comment on this critic page thingy. So, I just wanted to ask if you could critique my story? It's called The Hunger Games Of A Volunteer. It's a HG fanfic (yes, obviously). It's about this guy named Samhuel who lives in district 5 and has volunteered in the place of his disabled brother. My story only has two chapters, so if you could critique those 2 would be nice (: I would also like to know if I make many grammatical (and other) mistakes, since English is not my native language. Really appreciate that you do this (: