TheOfficalGolfball
excerpt of the Intellect rewrite (for ch1) "'AaaAAUGH!" I groaned, dragging my palm across my face. There was a growing pile of crumbled up papers on the ground, not to mention the ones scattered inside and outside of the trash bin. I picked up one of the crumbled up papers, opening it up and turning it over to read it. Whenever I'm beside you The world stops turning Stars grow dim Embarrassed to shine when you Already shine so brightly'"