TheOneAndOnlyTable

Ok I redid most of the dialogue with him from ch 12 and up. Dw, they're still plenty deranged, I'm just toning it down a bit. Who knows, they might go apeshit later on.
          	
          	...they probably will.

Wh4t4reyoudoinghere

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@ TheOneAndOnlyTable  oh shit
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azazazaazazar

@TheOneAndOnlyTable That's a good way to go imo
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TheOneAndOnlyTable

Ok I redid most of the dialogue with him from ch 12 and up. Dw, they're still plenty deranged, I'm just toning it down a bit. Who knows, they might go apeshit later on.
          
          ...they probably will.

Wh4t4reyoudoinghere

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@ TheOneAndOnlyTable  oh shit
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azazazaazazar

@TheOneAndOnlyTable That's a good way to go imo
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TheOneAndOnlyTable

Thinking about rewriting some of the dialogue in the latest chapter because I’m not super happy with how I’ve been writing 1x1x1x1 recently.
          
          Like, yeah, they’re supposed to be deranged, but I think I might be making him too intense. 
          
          Because my general idea is that the reason he’s acting the way he is because they were scared of being discarded like how they were with Shedletsky.
          
          But idk..I also worry that I made the relationship develop too fast aghhh. >m<
          
          I might do some retconning in the next chapter along with rewriting some of 1x’s dialogue…which might escalate into me reworking the relationship as a whole because it just doesn’t feel organic to me.
          
          Please lmk your thoughts, because I’ve been having a hard time working on the next chapter because of this…
          
          Sorry for the delays T_T

Wh4t4reyoudoinghere

I actually don't mind them like this but if you want to rewrite that'e totally fine!
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TheOneAndOnlyTable

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WAIT WHEN DID WE HIT 100k READS
          
          WHAT THE FUCK

yaweaa1

@TheOneAndOnlyTable probably like in the 1700s i forgot
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Vinny4486

time to bring out the red carpet 
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yaweaa1

i think im tweaking

TheOneAndOnlyTable

Um—you good over there?
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yaweaa1

I SWEAR I SEE THE BUBBLES
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yaweaa1

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FUCK ITS BECAUSE OF BEE SWARM
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TheOneAndOnlyTable

Ok guys real question here—
          
          I’ve been having a bit of a moral dilemma regarding characters like Shedletsky and Builderman, mostly because they are real people. Especially because they are both married irl.
          
          How do you guys want me to handle this? Should I acknowledge this in canon? (Mention brighteyes and builderman’s wife) or should I make a canon reason for why they aren’t in the picture?
          
          Additionally if I DO acknowledge the wives, how should I do it?
          
          There is also the option of removing them completely from the interest list but that would require a lot of rewriting and then I’d have to remove other characters based off real people as well (dusekkar, 007n7).
          
          How do you guys think I should go about this?

msvenusstar_

@msvenusstar_ wait, that sounds really stupid don't use that.
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XxAria90xX

@TheOneAndOnlyTable If were not using the real life people then were cool…
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GetCaged

@TheOneAndOnlyTable Builderman and Shedletsky are completely separate from their avatars, and do not represent the people themselves unless it's intentioned by the consumer
            
            I suggest just letting them be characters without attaching the real people to it! They are after-all, merely Roblox OCS basically.
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browdarl0278

You it would be..kind of silly if spec sees 7n7’s admin panel and just
          
          Specture:..*enables all of the banned commands*
          
          And let’s the chaos ensue as 7n7 plotting in everyone’s deaths and kidnapped C00lKID AND y/n (and yes he would definitely yank back his son if he got all of his commands back in the cannon forsaken)

TheOneAndOnlyTable

That would be really funny…but I can’t see a reason for the spectre to do that…not yet at least…*rubs hands together*
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