@ Emi-Didact i Just like the Darksiders story, belive It or not Is the first Darksiders story were one protagonist is a male and is parried with Fury, all other Darksiders story Is always female Reader with Death, War or Strife, there was one story with a Fury/male but It take a eternity to be uploaded and the author isn't even interested in his own story, this One you writed Is a loro better, theres a lot more of info about the Darksiders story, It isn't rushed, the characters are potrayed nicely, the relationships aren't also rushed and the whole situation Is a lot more studied and i can really see that you're trying you're best to make It a good Original Darksiders story, keep going like this. ( Sorry if i made some grammar mistake, i'm an italian.)