Heyy :) I just posted chapter 2 of my story Broken Hearts or Broken Dreams. You suggested I add more Dialog. I worked on that and I hope you like what I added in the 2nd chapter :) Check it out maybe?
Hello :) Could you please read my story Broken Hearts or Broken dreams. It only has 1 chapter so far and I would love some feedback if that's not too much to ask :)