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@AlyssaTomlinson3 You're moving the story a bit too fast. Slow down, stop and add more detail. If you don't you'll finish the story in only about three chapters! And spell out numbers; just listing them looks unprofessional. 

My book is Tight Casting, under needs improvement, what are some more things that I could do to improve my book?

@TristiPinkston Not a problem! The book is really great! 

Thanks for the follow and the vote!

Reading some great (and not so great) books!