Hey guys I was just wondering, this is supposed to be a good old fashioned action story, but should I put a little bit of love in with it? Btw im going to be adding alot to the first part of my story and changing the cover.
hey hey hey :) btw thanks for your awesome comments on my fanfic and btw yeah i like your fanfic :D haha i already commented what i thought about it on there so i am not going to repeat it here :)
no need for me to give you and other constructive criticism since it was pretty good, and its jsut your first chapter :) cant wait for the next chapter! :D