Thanks for the follow. Love to know what you think of my work. I just had a quick glance at your story, and I think it has a lot of potential, because I only read half a page I can't say that much. I just want to say you may want to slow down. Take the time to create the scene, and only use dialogue when you have to, I admit only one my stories I like on here because I try and do that. You could be amazing, but you just have to take the time to make people like your characters and much as you do.
Anyways thanks again for a follow.
Rosie
xoxo
