TheQuietOne_67

Hello everybody! Hope y'all satisfied with the rewritten story! I put more effort in that chapter so I hope y'all like it. Dw, I'm currently at 600 words in the second chapter and I think I'll publish it like this week or next month since my finals and projects are stacking up.
          	
          	Also, just for fun. Who do y'all think is the master of Balance? If you guys don't understand the last part since I rushed it, I'll give another hint.
          	
          	He's a ninja. That one is a pretty obvious hint sooo yeah. And when Korvath meant that he's always with Lloyd, I meant like currently. He's currently with Lloyd. Also, whoever gets it right gets a shout-out in the second chapter!

TheQuietOne_67

Hello everybody! Hope y'all satisfied with the rewritten story! I put more effort in that chapter so I hope y'all like it. Dw, I'm currently at 600 words in the second chapter and I think I'll publish it like this week or next month since my finals and projects are stacking up.
          
          Also, just for fun. Who do y'all think is the master of Balance? If you guys don't understand the last part since I rushed it, I'll give another hint.
          
          He's a ninja. That one is a pretty obvious hint sooo yeah. And when Korvath meant that he's always with Lloyd, I meant like currently. He's currently with Lloyd. Also, whoever gets it right gets a shout-out in the second chapter!

TheQuietOne_67

Lol, I forgot the password to this account and I may or may have forgot this account existed cuz I'm not active as usual anymore.
          
          I would like to announce that in rewritting "Trials of Balance" because the chapters are really messy. Hope y'all understand.
          
          Though there would be changes in the chapters.
          
          Welp, byeeeeeeeeee

MilaniaDavis0

Hey TheQuietOne_67’s I just would like you to hear my thoughts not bad one just thoughts
          
          In the survivors group 
          
          Zya he sounds like the heavy fire (machine gunners).
          
          Nyx she sounds like the medics, engineer, and radios (support role).
          
          Carl sounds like a a muscle guy who is the versatile infantry (riflemen).
          
          And Ajax sounds a lot like jay and is like the group explosive support (grenadiers). 
          
          These are my thoughts (possibly ideas for the type of group you want this to be) so yeah that’s just all and to be real and completely honest I love the story and would love to see more chapters if i’m not asking too much

TheQuietOne_67

@MilaniaDavis0 though I like the roles that you have given them. Thank you again 
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TheQuietOne_67

@MilaniaDavis0 aww thank you for sharing your thoughts. But I just want you to know that zya is a girl
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