Hi, just read your story. I found some grammar mistakes, and my sis (does not want to be exposed) advises you to work on your grammar. Anyway, I really want to compliment you on your description because normally I am terrible at describing and normally too lazy to do anything about it. Plus, you didn't go fast, unlike me, I just rushed through everything. So, you can say that I admire your patience. Pls update your story soon. I'm still working on chapter 2, so wait for me, will ya?
-NS589