SharadKumarSingh
Good evening.
I have red your work 'the new boy' and the story seems decent. The only thing wrong with it is that the story is a form of a large lump of text.
It's better to spilt the story into short paragraphes. It's easier for the eyes and the reader.
Do you get it? If you don't mind? Can you critique my work 'Homo Archnids' as well?
You would do me a huge favor if you do it.
Regards.
TheRealAnonymouss
I really like the way you write and I think you have great talent. Thank you very much for your comments on my short story and I will try to improve so that you like my work even more❤️