TheRealNeal
If anyone would be willing to proofread and double-check either Atonement or Trial By Fire I would much appreciate it!
TheRealNeal
It's good, but I'm just trying to use my own characters. Don't wanna step on Rooster Teeth's toes.
SteffenShafer
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Hey I think it would be cool if you were to include the character locus and Felix from red vs blue in your store atonement and do something like where the brutes actually hired them to kill the elites so they could steal there ship and weaponry but when Felix was so post to kill the ship master he just went be hind him with a knife at his neck and locus unclocking him self to reveal he had a sniper rifle at the back of the chieftains head and so Felix tells the ship master about how the prophet of atonement is actually an old customer of there's and if there willing to pay more than the brutes the'll not just tell them where the prophet might be but also kill all the brutes
So that's my idea hope you like it