Dahil si Park Shin Hye ang pic mo,. npadaan ako. :)
Anyway few pointers lang. It seems that you are having a bit of trouble with english grammar. Ok lang, for when you switched in Filipino, ayus na... feel ko na nadadala ka din habang sinusulat mo sya. And that's the essence of writing, for me at least. Ung nageenjoy ka mismo habang gngwa mo ung story. Cool.