TheRedDeathBringer
I just reread the first out chapters of VP, and then I asked myself why the hell anyone likes it? Honestly, this story to me had no plot, no structure, and not enough continuity. Half of me says to take it down, and half of me wants to re write the while goddamn thing. *sighs* Tell me what to do guys, I'm at an impass here. Thanks. -TRDB