Thank you to everyone who has applied for critiques in the romance/humor section! This is @themirandawrites, and I just wanted to apologize for late responses/critiques. I live down in Florida and we were just hit by a hurricane. I have been without power and unable to respond, and I am still currently without power. I have no clue when I'll be getting it back, but I am working intermittently at a cafe to get things done. Unfortunately, my writing has also been on hold because I have to fix up my house now. Thankfully, things aren't too bad, but I do have a lot piling up on my plate. Thank you for your patience with me!