RollyPollyBolly

So I'm going to post a snip of a story I'm working on. I have been rattling with this idea for a while and a close friend of mine said it was great but I really want some sort of feedback whether it be negative or positive. Now I do use some translated words so it may sound like nonsense. 

Man, I'm looking through these old messages and going damn. Life is crazy m8s. 

Hello babies! I live! 

Hi I accidentally unfollowed you, I apologize 

Should I post more stories? I write a lot and most people enjoy it.

Thank you for following!

OH HECC ITS BEEN SO LONG SINCE I WAS HERE!

BE MY FRIEND PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ

Hey. I just published a book. Go read it?

I AM DA HOOMAN TEM!