Dear Rosa,
I truly adore your work. It's original, inspiring, and funny, although there is always work for improvement. For example you could take into consideration learning better grammar or increasing your vocabulary. Please do not take this as your grammar is bad or you have a small vocabulary, your grammar and vocabulary are perfectly fine, I'm just suggesting areas that are possible to perfect and improve.
I know you're not all that confident in your work but you should be! You're a beginning author with so much potential, don't be discouraged by authors who have more views or followers, or think that their work is better than yours. At one point that big author was just as new to writing as you are. So please, if there is any way I can support you and help you become a brilliant author, I'm always here for you <3 Remember to stay strong and grow my friend, love ya!
-Galaxy x3
