TheRoyalDarkCrow

Greetings and Salutations.
          	
          	Basically, I'm rewriting "Did It Hurt?" 
          	
          	No, I'm not deleting the original work. In fact, I've been doing some very brief research and there have been authors (like Charles Dickens!) who have published different versions of the same novel.
          	
          	So yeah. There's no way I'm letting the concept of DIH go. I'm just reworking it, If you lot have any questions regarding major, minor or medium changes, feel free to ask!
          	
          	~Ollie.

TheRoyalDarkCrow

Greetings and Salutations.
          
          Basically, I'm rewriting "Did It Hurt?" 
          
          No, I'm not deleting the original work. In fact, I've been doing some very brief research and there have been authors (like Charles Dickens!) who have published different versions of the same novel.
          
          So yeah. There's no way I'm letting the concept of DIH go. I'm just reworking it, If you lot have any questions regarding major, minor or medium changes, feel free to ask!
          
          ~Ollie.

TheRoyalDarkCrow

Hey, ya’ll! It’s been a while. How are you?
          
          ~Ollie

Mooooo10101021

@TheRoyalDarkCrow omg I'm so excited your my fav author
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TheRoyalDarkCrow

@Mooooo10101021 The announcement is further down my page, but June 25th!
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Mooooo10101021

@TheRoyalDarkCrow good but when can we expect your next book
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TheRoyalDarkCrow

Hi guys! I recently moved. In light of this, please be advised that I might have to push back “What She Found “‘s release. On the bright side, here’s another excerpt!
          
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          "I-I uh.." He rung his hands nervously, then ran them through his hair. "I wa-wanted to apologize... f-for earlier." 
          
          "Oh, that?" She blew a strand of hair out of her eyes. Placing her hands flat on the counter, she met his eyes. "Already forgiven and forgotten. I don't care about the small stuff." The vampire bit her lip. 
          
          "I-I just h-have a l-lot on my p-plate." It felt dumb. It felt like a lie, the way the words fell from his lips. Ayden looked back at Puck, thinking he'd pick up on the mummy's weak tone, but he wasn't paying attention. Ayden turned back to Olivia. "I-I don't h-hate you, if-if that's wha-what you're t-thinking."
          
          Olivia's eyes widened. "I wasn't thinking that."
          
          "I-I'm just n-not g-good at ma-making friends." Ayden looked away when he said this, too shy to look at her anymore. 
          
          "Can I be your friend?" 
          
          "I-I-"
          
          "Wow, you can practically feel the sexual tension brewing up in here." Ayden jumped and whirled around at Puck, who burst out laughing. "All jokes, my good friend." Olivia looked mortified. They both watched as Puck made his way to the storage closet to put the broom and rag away. "You don't need to worry, 'Liv," he was saying. "Ayden and I are a packaged deal. You befriend one of us, you befriend both of us. Thick as thieves, we'll be. Now all that's left for us to do-" he shut the closet and faced them both of them, grinning. "is for us to discuss our tastes in erotica." 
          
          Ayden choked. "D-dude!" 
          
          "What is wrong with your brain?" Olivia asked, but she was laughing. It was a full, boisterous laugh, and Ayden found himself missing something when it stopped. "You are so lucky we have no customers right now."
          
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          Thoughts?
          ~Ollie.
          

TheRoyalDarkCrow

Little late, but here’s the promised snippet for “What She Found”!
          
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          Ayden huffed and sat back in his chair. "H-how was pra-practice?" 
          
          Puck took a swig of his soda, capped it, then folded his arms over the table, his grin back where it belonged. "Long and hard." A sudden sparkle twinged in his eye. 
          
          Ayden gave him a look. "D-don't you d-dare-"
          
          "Like my d-"
          
          Before he could finish, Ayden stood up from the table, leaned over and poked his best friend in the eye. Puck let out a cry and ended in a laugh and Ayden sat back down. "We a-are in pu-public." He said sternly. 
          
          Puck laughed, loud and booming in the small restaurant. "When has that ever stopped me, Jay?" They were silent for a moment. He took a drink of his soda again, and looked at Ayden's that went untouched, then at Ayden himself, who was looking out the window. "Oh my god, dude," Puck groaned. "when are you going to get a girlfriend?"
          
          The question took Ayden by surprise and his head snapped suddenly to looked at Puck. He looked at him like his best friend had just grown an arm from his forehead. "W-what?"
          
          The opposing person threw up his arms. "Or a boyfriend, I don't know what you're into. But Jay, you look lonely."
          
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          Thoughts?
          ~Ollie

AsheCrimsonV

@hawks0505 My queerdar has never been wrong so far
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hawks0505

At last a snippet!! Looks really promising! ... @AshCrimsonV they are most probably gay....
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AsheCrimsonV

@TheRoyalDarkCrow I have a feeling they're gay...maybe
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