traceylev
Looking forward to this
TheSallyB
TheSallyB
Hi everyone, Abrogation is almost done so I wanted to update you on Split. I will be starting it on Wed 15th July. I’m not committing to a schedule but I will say that updates will be at minimum, every other day. For those joining me, I’ll see you next week. SB x
JudyDowns
more chapters please!!!! lol
Wingchick99
I don't want to be that reader lol but I was wondering if you're still going to publish The Secret Life of Blythe. I've been wanting to reread lol. If you're not going to I completely understood
TheSallyB
@Kayleew32 that’s sweet of you. Thanks for the Inkitt rec. I’ll look in to it. I didn’t realise how complicated it is to publish when I first set out. I’ll find a way to get the book to those of you that want to read it. I’m also looking in to Patreon as that might stop ppc sites stealing my work too. I’ll let you know what I decide x
Kayleew32
@Mks8272jsj re-reading this thread and wanted to mention that I find this quite rude. I think it’s uncalled for to tell an author when to post their stories, that they WILLINGLY share with readers. They aren’t on a timeline just for your sake.. Just want to remind you that these authors are people that have lives outside of writing, and we should always treat others with kindness & respect. :)
TheSallyB
@Mks8272jsj unfortunately things aren’t that simple. I will update everyone when I have news. Thanks
JudyDowns
will this book be updated again??
TheSallyB
@JudyDowns Hi Judy, it’s been so hot in the UK this week the cows are giving evaporated milk lol. I’ll add a chapter tonight and over the weekend now it’s cooler and I can concentrate x
Kayleew32
Hi! When can we expect another chapter of Split? I’m hooked already!
VitoriaSilva6431
about the book, abrogation:
I'm not usually the type to write reviews, but here's one, because I absolutely loved this book.
The story takes place in an unequal society where humans are born with supernatural physical and mental abilities and, upon turning eighteen, form bonds with one another.
These bonds are created within groups of three or more people, where one person serves as the central link, holding immense influence and importance over the others.
In a corrupt totalitarian system where the elite controls the economy, politics, and the entire structure of society, those living on the outskirts are left to fend for themselves—poor, hungry, and vulnerable.
The story begins when the protagonist, an ordinary girl from the lower districts, is accused and convicted of a crime she did not commit. Even worse, years later, she discovers that the people responsible for her suffering belong to the family of one of her bondmates. They are members of the elite—the same people who look down on and discriminate against people like her.
The bond is supposed to be instantaneous, erasing guilt and fear while filling those affected by it with devotion and love. However, the protagonist possesses a unique power: she can prevent bonds from fully forming.
As a result, she has an ability that many could only dream of—keeping her destined partners completely unaware of who she is. Unfortunately for her, that also means they can, and will, hate her without realizing that she is actually the central link of a bond stronger than anything or anyone else.
I absolutely loved the core premise of the story: a corrupt world, supernatural powers, magical bonds, destiny, and social inequality.
However, I do have some issues with how the plot develops.
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TheSallyB
@VitoriaSilva6431 Firstly, wow, what a fabulous review. Thank you for taking the time to give me your thoughts. Honestly - I just wish I had the time to properly plan plots and expand on world building etc but I dont unfortunately. A full time job means I only get to write for the odd hour here and there. It’s just a little hobby for me. I hope you enjoy the rest of the book x
VitoriaSilva6431
Anyway, feel free to ignore this review. You may think I'm overanalyzing or making a big deal out of nothing, but I genuinely believe this story has a lot of potential.
When it comes to romance, relationship development, and group dynamics, it outshines many famous published books. However, its worldbuilding leaves a little more to be desired.
VitoriaSilva6431
3. The Antagonist
All social inequality is caused by one woman.
And for a rather shallow reason.
The villain's entire motivation feels shallow. Carmen is a one-dimensional character who lacks depth.
The world's structure is very simple: everyone else is innocent, and she is the source of all evil.
Seriously, I understand that Carmen is supposed to be the villain, but every single conflict in the book somehow traces back to her.
Social inequality? Carmen.
Biological weapons? Carmen.
Genocide? Carmen.
Childhood trauma and brainwashing? Carmen.
Torture and political manipulation? Carmen.
I think the reason every problem feels so easy to solve is because everything begins and ends with her.
I also find myself wondering: even if her family is powerful, could they really govern everyone and everything without the cooperation and support of the elite?
Mks8272jsj
Please yarr update the the secret life of blythe please
Teetee07613
I’ve heard great things about the secret life of Blythe & wondering where I can read it. I thought it was available here but I don’t see it. I’m excited to read your other books, they are exactly what I’ve been looking for.
TheSallyB
Hi, I am hoping TSLOB will be available on Amazon at some point. I’ll update my followers as soon as I have news. I hope you enjoy my other books
connieann123
Is there physical cheating in where we landed duet?