ComedyGold1

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Read the bad fanfic thing. To be honest, that's some great constructive criticism and highlights key points on how to write on a better scale. I'm trying to make my own fanfic but realised researching took one hell of a long time. I have dedicated lots of hours looking through the GuP wikis and the tanks real life counterpart in order to have a more grounded story. Also for the romance, I'm working on trying to have an actual reason to like the guy instead of the love at first sight bullshit.
          
          Anyways hopefully my story doesn't end up in the list lol. 

darkknight965

@ComedyGold1 Well, maybe not.
            
            I'm also trying to write the same thing, took quite a while thinking character lores, many stuff can make me change my mind 180.
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