TheSilentC

I NEED FEEDBACK ON MY WORK!
          	Hello, I wrote a story that I want to turn into a full novel. I'm inexperienced when it comes to proper writing techniques and I would like ANYONE to check out the story I wrote and give me some feed back on it. Is it good? is it bad? What do you like about it? What needs to be fixed or improved? Just let me know what you think. Thanks