Meredith, Ashlina, Piper, Nicolio and Kaylise

Mind reading and rating my newest story, Goliath? I'm afraid it might move too quickly; I'd just like some constructive criticism! :)

rate my poems please

Critique?

Rate my story please?

@TheStoryRaters awwww thanx =3

We only had 1 entry for the writing contest... 1.... Oh well, life goes on. But you know what? Monopoly Madness probably would have won if there were 100 entries! Congrats to @sjn007 for winning the contest anyway! Loved your entry, it was fun to read ^.^
          

@TheStoryRaters yh I have =)

@CryssTheWanted great! See you while we're judging :)
          @sjn007 worked pretty hard on it XD why don't you join?

@TheStoryRaters ohhh board game character. Hmm..... I'll try this one.

@TheStoryRaters I'll try! I'm not familiar with video games lol