@TheTalonseries I’ll go in order of thoust’s questions.
I don’t really like romance at all, so I won’t say much here.
Definitely. Much more.
This question requires more attention. Less meaningless violence as a whole, but more of good stuff. What I mean is that you shouldn’t put in so much gore just to put in gore. It needs to serve a purpose. Don’t have it be a random character that gets ripped up if it’s just meant to inflict sick feelings. Spend time at least highlighting them so that an emotional bond can be formed and sympathy achieved before anything terrible happens. Make it seem realistic, so that the audience thinks “that could’ve been me, or my friend,” so that it really strikes deep.
If you place the details in the right scenes, then yes, I think more detailed scenes would be fantastic.
More species would be interesting, but I feel that they should be ironed out. Put more detail into how they’re different and that no two are the same, and it’ll seem much more like your hand-crafted world.
I think it’d be interesting to see them of two different species.
Book 1. More time to character-develop.
If you mean like random snippets of the week, then for sure. A bit of gradual change in narration would also be a bonus to simulate the protagonist’s growing madness.
Yes, but don’t make him any less funny.
