TheTomorrowStories

I just published the revised version for the first chapter! Sorry to change the (some) plot and I probably wouldn’t change it again.
          	
          	Reason for me to do this: 
          	
          	I want this story to make sense logically and adhere as much as possible to the original works. So I had to change some things and make others more easy to understand.
          	
          	

TheTomorrowStories

Pink_Food

@TheTommorowStories i dont watch death note but i know a little, and i already know that your book is gonna be great 
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