TheToryCat

Thanks for the vote and follow on Wolf People! I appreciate having you as a new set of eyes, Cheers!

@rabbitsandroses It's just that the sentence is worded awkwardly. "As their paws" feels like their paws are doing something while the rest of them is doing something else. Also, they were walking off somewhere as they landed? 
          
          This is just an example of how I'd write this sentence: "Their paws met the ground with barely a sound and together they walked into the heart of the crowd already assembled for the Gathering."

I FUKIN LOVE YOUR STORY 'AND ALL YOUR HEROES DIE' BEST STORY(and English) I'VE  EVER READ.  In my opinion best Khr story I've ever read on Wattpad! 

thanks for fanning me n i hope u enjoy the shattered mind saga