TheTravelersJourney
I'm trying to figure out what to write next. Any ideas?
TheTravelersJourney
AllisonCurran9
Really love your work and find it similar to the style I aspire for. I would love to hear your thoughts on mine, I'm very green and have never before shared my writing.....
TheTravelersJourney
@AllisonCurran9 oh I'm not that good I'm just a dyslexic guy who gets emotional and wants to write
AllisonCurran9
Wow, thank you so much, that is very encouraging! I look forward to reading more of your work and learning from all you great writers. :)
TheTravelersJourney
@AllisonCurran9 your work is spectacular! I loved it! What I would do is go into a bit more detail. Adding in sensory objects such as what you hear and smell and describing them pulls the reader in and makes them start to see the world through your eyes : )
TheTravelersJourney
Hey guys just wanted to apologize for not putting in another part last night I worked a 10 hour shift at work and was just too tiered to post but I'll throw one up today around 12-13hours from now stay tuned for more adventures
The Traveler
TheTravelersJourney
Im gunna add to this story day by day for about 10 days