TheTravellersloft

I am currently revising Dangerous, Diabolical and going to give querying agents a shot. I'll be posting the heavily edited version on Patreon - I'm also looking for beta readers if anyone is interested in giving me some critical feedback. For those of you waiting I'm still writing Realm Thief, and will drop a chapter soon, as well as book 3 - but invested in editing at the moment. 
          	
          	And wow - do I describe a lot. Have a great May all xoxo

bvpp00

@TheTravellersloft  I just sent you an email. Would love to.
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TheTravellersloft

@bvpp00 @bvpp00 I LOVED your comments. MM is only on it's first draft, so having feeedback helps so much in telling me where pacing needs to change, or foreshadowing should happen. I cannot thank you enough and having comments when people read to the end and feel so strongly about it is honestly why I want to try and get published. Thank you <3
          	  
          	  You are more than welcome to read/beta. It's a google docs though? If you're interested drop me an email at vannhwrites@gmail.com :) 
          	  
          	  DD has changed a lot! The opening is different, there's a few more scenes, and things are happening if different orders. I'd be honoured if you have time!
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bvpp00

@TheTravellersloft Good for you! I always thought your books should made into films. I reread Dangerous Diabotical just recently. It was even better than I remembered. The chapters when I reread said edited, is that yet another version? 
          	  I am a bit ashamed of my critical remarks about part 2  - I now see it fits the storyline perfectly. I don’t think Dangerous Diabotical needs much editing.
          	  If you cannot find enough beta readers, I would happily volunteer.
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TheTravellersloft

I am currently revising Dangerous, Diabolical and going to give querying agents a shot. I'll be posting the heavily edited version on Patreon - I'm also looking for beta readers if anyone is interested in giving me some critical feedback. For those of you waiting I'm still writing Realm Thief, and will drop a chapter soon, as well as book 3 - but invested in editing at the moment. 
          
          And wow - do I describe a lot. Have a great May all xoxo

bvpp00

@TheTravellersloft  I just sent you an email. Would love to.
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TheTravellersloft

@bvpp00 @bvpp00 I LOVED your comments. MM is only on it's first draft, so having feeedback helps so much in telling me where pacing needs to change, or foreshadowing should happen. I cannot thank you enough and having comments when people read to the end and feel so strongly about it is honestly why I want to try and get published. Thank you <3
            
            You are more than welcome to read/beta. It's a google docs though? If you're interested drop me an email at vannhwrites@gmail.com :) 
            
            DD has changed a lot! The opening is different, there's a few more scenes, and things are happening if different orders. I'd be honoured if you have time!
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bvpp00

@TheTravellersloft Good for you! I always thought your books should made into films. I reread Dangerous Diabotical just recently. It was even better than I remembered. The chapters when I reread said edited, is that yet another version? 
            I am a bit ashamed of my critical remarks about part 2  - I now see it fits the storyline perfectly. I don’t think Dangerous Diabotical needs much editing.
            If you cannot find enough beta readers, I would happily volunteer.
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__Star_______light__

Hello!
          One question: Is there any reason why Dangerous Diabotical and Malificant Manical are offline?
          I mean I'done with thise two but I'd like to reread them sooner or later. (And just recommended them to some friends).

TheTravellersloft

@f4r33d4h @__Star_______light__ I am re-editing it because I want query agents. But I can't leave it posted online if I want to get published because agents want first rights :( 
            
            I am putting the new version on patreon for a while for feedback if you want to check that out (Free but needs an account)
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f4r33d4h

I also wanted to ask. I can't find them
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TheTravellersloft

I am pleased to announce that after a year of fighting writer's block vs sporadic writing and one giant hyperfocus later, I have finally finished Malignant, Maniacal (Book 2). I'm going to slowly make my way through all the comments and messages over the past couple of months. Thank you to all of you dropping messages and reading my work from the bottom of my heart. 
          
          The last chapter is queued to post on December 4th. You can also read it now on my Patreon. There are ten parts left to post!
          
          To all of you messaging and commenting and voting again--Thank you--You're literally what keeps me going <3
          
          Stay tuned for book 3... and hopefully the finished version of 'The Realm Thief'

DeejayDJ010

@TheTravellersloft Late to see this. But you have done a great job
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bvpp00

@TheTravellersloft I am surprised you suffered from writing block since writing seems to come so naturally to you. I haven’t read anything like it. I truly feel you are a very talented writer. Very much looking forward to part 3.
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TheTravellersloft

@nadzzsam I got overwhelmed with trying to update two T_T I'm going to put it back up this month because i'm tackling it for National writing month :D
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