I want you guys to rate this (this is the merikh confrontation scene)
It was slow, soft, and careful but Erin felt the air next to them shift and a small weight be taken off their belt from where it was hidden. Before they had time to process or even glance at virlamin next to them the loud shock of what could only belong to a gun rang though their ears. After silence that lasted forever there were desperate gasps for air followed only by the thud of a body hitting the floor'
Chapter 10
Cobalt smiled as braken struggled to grab the flour and bring it over (bla bla bla)
Then I proceed to write Erin comming back to Earth and showing what happened though a very brief summer later from Erins perspective
1 though 'i was killed before you finished reading' how mad are you at me?