TheTrueGodPandora

Cosmic paths update? What?!?! I hope the one person who reads it likes it :)

TheTrueGodPandora

I want you guys to rate this (this is the merikh confrontation scene)
          It was slow, soft, and careful but Erin felt the air next to them shift and a small weight be taken off their belt from where it was hidden. Before they had time to process or even glance at virlamin next to them the loud shock of what could only belong to a gun rang though their ears. After silence that lasted forever there were desperate gasps for air followed only by the thud of a body hitting the floor'
          Chapter 10
          Cobalt smiled as braken struggled to grab the flour and bring it over (bla bla bla)
          
          Then I proceed to write Erin comming back to Earth and showing what happened though a very brief summer later from Erins perspective
          
          1 though 'i was killed before you finished reading' how mad are you at me?

TheTrueGodPandora

In case anyone who cares missed it I entered cosmic paths into the scholastic writers contest and removed it from here until the judging is over

TheTrueGodPandora

For anyone that cares (the three people who follow this account) might post on my main would any of you like a alien species of your creation to appear in cosmic paths? 
          
          I know I don't do descriptions much but some characters (like cobo) don't have species and I love to just have species I can throw into if I needed
          
          So please if you have a species either tell me a deception and traits :)