Hi Author-san ♡
Thank you so much for The Last Female Saiyan. I’m honestly blown away. It’s one of the best takes on Saiyan instincts I’ve ever read. The way the males react to her—protective without knowing why—feels primal and real, not just plot convenience. You tapped into something deeper, and I loved it.
Your OC? Chef’s kiss. She’s witty, strong, bold —and her scenes with Trunks? Whew. The chemistry is insane. Their dynamic is perfectly paced—not too slow, not too fast—and the sexual tension is so thick I wanna smash their faces together just to get them to kiss already. I know it’s building for a reason, and I respect that, but also: I’m screaming.
And your Vegeta? Incredible. He’s not just the stoic prince—he has depth, love for Bulma that leaks through his tsundere shell, and how his relationship with Trunks made my heart melt. You made him feel real.
I’m hooked. Thank you for giving Saiyans culture, instinct, and soul. This is exactly the story I’ve been waiting for.
—A very emotional and invested reader ♡
P.S: This message was supposed to be wayyyy longer, but I hit the word limit, so this is what I can say so far! (^^)♡