TheWildflowerPiglet

@Lorraine-neechan  I've only read a bit but it's great so far :). The only tip that I'd give you is to check for grammar mistakes or ask someone to edit/check for you but it's good. 

Lorraine-neechan

@TheWildflowerPiglet  Thanks btw for reading. And thanks for the suggestions to improve my writings. I'll try to edit it ASAP :) Thanks again.
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TheWildflowerPiglet

@Lorraine-neechan  I've only read a bit but it's great so far :). The only tip that I'd give you is to check for grammar mistakes or ask someone to edit/check for you but it's good. 

Lorraine-neechan

@TheWildflowerPiglet  Thanks btw for reading. And thanks for the suggestions to improve my writings. I'll try to edit it ASAP :) Thanks again.
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