TheWondersMind

Hi author, I've read sooooo many fanfics and they usually annoy me because they kill off severus or they change the characters personalites and ik ppl have their own styles but this is the best fanfic I've read bc you have included some of the original plot lines of the original Harry potter movies/books and kept it real with the characters if that makes sense and through the hundreds of books I've read this is the most rememberable and I will read it again soon and I'll  try to get my mates to read it because the amount of feelings I felt through this was remarkable. Keep writing you will go very far and I can't wait to read your spin off
          Love your little badger- summer 

Heyy.I am a very big fan of" Where your loyalty lies". I enjoyed it as much as every one else did.I just wanna say THANK YOU SO MUCH for giving as a unique and fantastic fanfiction such as" Where your loyalty lies". And don't even get me started on "Rewrite the stars", which is going amazing by the way. I Really am looking forward to read more of that fanfiction and more of your other works. Thank you for giving us amazing fanfictions.

Hello!! Honestly, I’ve read a lot on Snape x Reader fanfics. Never have I come across one so amazing as ‘Where your loyalties lie.’ The title itself holds so much meaning and soul. The development of all the characters are so accurate and true it makes the story 10 or even 100 times better! The way everyone is written feels so right and I’ve never thought I’d feel this amazed over a fanfic. The amount of emotional rollercoasters I’ve went on during my time reading the story were truly better then any rollercoaster in any amusement park. Keep up the good work, I can tell you are going to great places in your future. 

Hi, i've noticed quite a few spelling and grammatical errors in your story 'where your loyalties lie'. I was wondering if perhaps you'd like me to edit it?

Hello there, Author. We may not know each other but I have things to say.
          
          First of all, Thank you. Thank you for the happy ending that you gave to Snape.
          As a fan of Snape (Alan Rickman), I honestly can't watch the part where Snape died because it never fails to break my heart. But this story that you made... you made my heart truly happy.
          I didn't have the chance to meet Snape's actor, Alan Rickman because I was young when he passed. I promise to re-read this every chance that I have.
          Expect my deepest support in every story about Snape.
          
          Again, Thank you so so much and I wish you happiness and prosperity

Hi TheWondersMind! I just wanted to let you know Where Your Loyalties Lie is the best Snape fanfic I've ever read! I know you are starting a spinoff, and so far, it's amazing! I'm unsure if you are taking requests, but I was wondering if your next story could be a sequel to Where Your Loyalties Lie. Again, you are a wonderful writer, and keep going because you're doing amazing! Love your tiktoks as well!

FINALLY!!! Rewrite the stars is here!!! THANK YOU!!

Hello, TheWondersMind! I really wanted to thank you for making a fanfic about Snape! It’s really good. I’m rereading the ‘‘Where your loyalties lie’’ for the second time now! And I hope you would writing the book 2! (I really hope Y/N would have children, it would be so lovely!) Thank you.

HELLO AUTHOR!! I REALLY LOVE YOUR SNAPE FANFIC SO MUCHHH !! THANK YOU FOR MAKING IT♥️♥️♥️♥️

@Discontinued_Writer Hi! Good question - had to think that for a moment (or two). I guess my advice would be to create a character flaw for the person, whenever it has something to do with their looks or poor abilities with something. For example they could be "too tall" or "too short", or maybe blind from one eye with cool scar going across their face they feel embarrassed/insecure about(?) Have some story behind it. Whatever calls you and fits in your story. Have fun with the flaw, but don't make it as the main focus of the whole story. And I guess if you specificly want to get in touch female readers, I guess you need to throw some struggles that women have - such as periods, dress doesn't fit, some other girls talking bad behind her back etc. Obviously, these are just examples, but I do hope this helped you even just the tiny bit ❤️