@Aetila Thanks, that total dissing, woke me up a bit! lol. Well criticism is better than praise, cause you certainly learn more from it. Its not such a rush to reply, cool it! I'll get to editing it and its fast because the whole time ever since I was seven I've been thinking, writing and drawing Hans, moulding his character and origins, and it all seems too familiar, so sorry about the jumpy story ;)
and notice that i am actually 12, birthdays in august lol.