The Zen of Gavin

Yep. https://www.wattpad.com/story/102983991

@JettaFrame Yeah a lil'something something.

@JettaFrame I'm good actually. How about you.

@JettaFrame I know eh, it's the first one that popped up in a search and I just had to get that dude off my profile.

@JettaFrame It's an 8 week class, two more to go but so far so good. I have been working a lot on editing Hummingbird and that is what I've been submitting. It's a class of experienced and novice writers. My first two submissions, most all of them couldn't get past the phonetic writing, i.e. all'm or walkin' and bout etc. So I left the dialect in but removed the phonetic writing in my third submission. It was the chapter where Mercy meets Picks (which I have edited a lot since you last read it) and received high praise from everybody.
          
          I hate tooting my own horn but it really was a surreal moment. The the guy running it (he's a best selling author, SiFi) the comments he made and even reading a couple of passages and saying clearly you are a talented writer and it's amazing how my work becomes so much better by simply removing the phonetic writing, as it's clear enough in my stye she has the Southern dialect. 
          
          Around the room it went with all good things to say and passages being read. It's an experience I wont forget because the previous submission was near the opposite.
          
          One retired pastor said he wished he could write like that.  Another 60 yr old guy gave me a fist bump after class. It was just a weird moment for me. 
          
          Ok sorry I'm done tooting my horn just need to tell somebody.
          
          How Jetta?

@JettaFrame I took Mercy offline for now cause I'm in a Novel Writing class (first class setting in like twenty years for me and I have to say I don't miss that one person who never shuts the bleep up). Anyway the class is basically us writing a novel and critiquing each over every week.  Enjoying it. I'm using Mercy.

@JettaFrame No, this is an autobot response. 
          
          No actually it's not, I'm alive but if I were an autobot that's what I'd say.

Apologies for all the update notifications everybody. Expect more.

@JettaFrame Oops sorry. I'm adding new chapters. Expect more, just ignore'm. Going through them faster than I thought.  It'll start slowing down soon. I almost promise. 
          
          I know what you mean though, it's annoying getting all those notifications. I obsoletely don't mind if you unfollow until they're all up.

Apologies for all the edits recently.