Hi I just finished reading Crash Landing and absolutely loved it! It was extremely creative with a very unique plot when it comes to the alien romance type stories. The characters you’ve created have shown quite in-depth personalities making it easy to like/dislike although as they enter the scene you’ve made it so it is a no simple to determine their personality traits and keeps you guessing, but once the plot develops further and they show their true colours, it’s easy to feel as though you know them personally (hence whether they are a likeable character or one you dislike/ villain types). My absolute favourite character was Mae with her sassy personality, independent nature, and strong will. You had me in a fit of giggles and tears with her sarcasm and personal conversation/inner monologue as she flew the ship - my all time favourite. The only down side was the story ending - which always seems a shame when you find yourself so deeply immersed in a fantastic book. I did think it was a shame that there wasn’t more detail provided between the scenes of Mabel’s near death, reunion and the elements in the epilogue. It would have been good read about personal experiences with emotions running high, from all the unexpected turn of events from concreted relationships, reunions not anticipated, coronation and possible wedding/mating rituals, whether her younger sister finds a mate pull, how the new changed dynamics of father/son relationship develop and change, plus the all the events surrounding the surprise of the miracle to be...
But I firmly feel it was a top quality piece of writing that you definitely have great creative talent and high level writing skills to achieve. Cannot wait to read Collision (I tend to wait till their complete so I can binge on the story start to finish), so eager to read more!