The_Chiara_Sullivan

New story in SHORT STORIES "Prison for the Elderly"

_luvyourself

Hey there! Thank you for reading my book "From A Stranger". And as far as Peter is concerned, I have something in mind for him. :)

The_Chiara_Sullivan

 Oh good!  That's what I thought...it seemed like you focused a lot on him.  Although the fact that the girl loses her memory as well kinda kills the story.  The entire story is suspended on her reaction when he returns...but there's nothing.
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t_double2oneB

Thanks for the follow back! Also, I'd be glad if you checked out my book, voted and commented on it! Pm me if you ever need a read or proofreading help!!
          http://my.w.tt/UiNb/x7zBSO3jBA

The_Chiara_Sullivan

I would love to!  I'll let you know what I think.  It u want you could check out any of my books too :)
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